Saturday 30 June 2012

CHAPTER 4

Tuesday

Deena woked up Lolwa..

*Deena is Lolwa's maid*

Lolwa woke up brushed,washed and dressed for school.
Went downstaires and ate breakfast.

Lolwa:RAJJJJ.
Raj: yes mam?

She rembered that khalid is watching every step she do!!!

Lolwa: wadne starbucks.
Raj: ok madam.

Lolwa went inside the car.
WEENAH?AKEED HE IS LYING TO ME!!!

She wanted to make sure again...
Then she saw him.

OMG*ohmygod*
Wait!Wait!
Layshoufne,wede akhth another gaze on him,wallah zouqah!
Bes Lolwa,Est7ay 3ala wayhech shway! *she said*

We9alat starbucks.
Joined the line..
Ordered chocolate Frappicuno.
Khaled came and whispered in Lolwa's ear: Its my favourite and went.
Lolwa: *blushed* and giggled.

She took her coffee and went to school.
Before her entrance to school she took a glance on him and went inside.

Khalid smiled and went to college.

She told Jude and Fatima about everything.
they were happy for her and Jude was kinda jealous.

Lolwa went home.

CHAPTER 3

Lolwa slept for 3 hours..
Then woke up.
It was 6:30

Checked her mentions and direct message.

Hello,I need to talk to you fassssssssst...here is my pin:***********.

Lolwa stood in her place and daydreaming then Lolwa called Jude and Fatima told them about the anonymous who sent the message.

Jude: Lwailo,shnu btsawen?
Lolwa: Madre *HUFF*
Fatima: maybe its urgent?
Lolwa: eeh 9a7,bes maybe he said this 3ashan athefah?
Jude:Eeem,shoufay thefeh ow shoufay shnu yabe ow etha bes chthe habal ignore invitations.
Lolwa and Fatima: That's a good idea JUDEEEE!
Jude: A3jbkum ha *Laughing*
Lolwa and Fatima: LOOL.
Lolwa:yallah bye.
Jude and Fatima: bye.

After a while she added him on bbm.

*Khaled was his name*

Khaled: Hello,Thanks for adding..I need to talk to you.
Lolwa: Hey,sure?
Khaled: No, I need to talk to you face to face?
Lolwa: la sorry ma'agdar!
Khaled: ok,then...
Lolwa: ok?,you can say here if you want..?
Khaled: ok,one minute.

khaled changed his display picture.

Lolwa shouted: NO HELL!!! He's cuteeeeeeeeeeeeee.

Ahmed heard Lolwa shouting..
he came in.

Ahmed:Lolwa shfech???????????????????
Lolwa:Ahmed,mafene yumah ekhtr3t 3ala bale shft 9ar9our.*TARGEEE3*.
Ahmed:khara3tene 3ala bale fech shay,kelah 9ar9our?byaklech ouhu?
Lolwa:LOOL sorry.

He left the room..

khaled: PING!!!
khaled: PING!!!
Lolwa: sorry,mashft el phone.
Khaled:3ade..bghet agolch shay!
Lolwa: Tfathal.
Khaled: zad fathlech,bagolch shay bes ma'abech trdeen ghair lama akhle9.
Lolwa: sh9ayr?
khaled: entay sm3ene bel awal ow b3den goulay ely tabeenah.
Lolwa: inchallah.
Khaled: Ana kelyuom el 9b7 agom abdel ow an6rech bes t6l3een men el bait ow al7gech lai el madresah ashoufech ow atn7 ow an6erch lama tdkhlen ow arou7 el college.
Lolwa: HA *shockness*
Khaled: hatha kel ely 3ande ow ana tara a7bech.

A7bech?ambaiiiihhh can't handle it?
Shlounnnn?

Lolwa: madre shagoulek!
Khaled: la tgolen shay bes ely kent abeh a6l3 ely eb galbe...
Lolwa:Eem. *WAIHHH MADRE SHAGOUL*
khaled: Adre enich ma9doumah bes shsawe magdar amsek galbe.
Lolwa: ana asfah bes..
Khaled: khalene bes 3andech bel bbm 3al aqal.
Lolwa: Eeem,khalas ok!
Khaled:Thanks.
Lolwa:welcome.

HE's damen hot....AWELE!

Saleh: ha shlounch?

WEEEEH HATHA SHYABE EL7EEEN *MALE KHLGAH*

Lolwa: tamam*mabe as2alah ow enta shlounk 3ashan ma'nkther suwalf..*
Saleh: doum.
Lolwa:Thankyou.
Saleh:Wlc.

Lolwa called Jude:

Lolwa:ALOOOOOOOOO
Jude: ya7mara*yawned*
Lolwa: gumay bagoulch shay muhem.
Jude: khaleha bacher abe at'hanah eb noumte*HUFF*
Lolwa: HUFF eb 3ainch,ya shagoul bagolch something important.
Jude: goulay?
Lolwa: Someone fall in love with me ow...
Jude: OMG*ohmygod*..continue.
Lolwa: enzen ow kelyuom yn6rne meta a6la3 men el bait ow ytn7 fene ow lama adesh yrou7 el jam3ah.
Jude: KIDDING,WHO THE HELL HE IS?
Lolwa: Lol,his name is Khaled.
Jude: what about Saleh?
Lolwa: madre 3anah,Jude the other guy is damn hot.
Jude: hahaha,shaklech t3lgtay.
Lolwa: Lol shaku,bes rou7ay khmday!
Jude: La wallah,a3lmech bes ashoufech bacher.
Lolwa: Abe ashouf if he's really waiting for me.
Jude: hahaha,t3alag beh t3alag.
Lolwa: enough! bye.
Jude: bye.

The next day...

Friday 29 June 2012

CHAPTER 2

She replied to Saleh.

Hey,Emmm I'm not sure I know you and I'm sorry I don't add boys on bbm.
*She felt confused*

Saleh replied after 5minutes.

I'm sorry I asked you,but I have liked your tweets a lot and I would like to know you better..Anyways here is my pin***********.

Lolwa read the message,kept thinking and fell asleep.

Lolwa woke up checked her direct messages again.
There was no message!

She went to school.

Jude: Lwailo shlounch?
Lolwa:zeina ow esra7at.
Fatima: ow ana mafe salam.
Lolwa: Smiled,Hala wallah eb Fatima.
Fatima: Halla fech 7abibty.
Jude: LWAILOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!
Lolwa kanat sar7anah ow mardat.
Jude: Lwailo shfech elyuom?
Lolwa Entbhat.
Lolwa: mafene shay?
Jude: Emballah fech?9ayer shay?
Lolwa: kinda of?
Jude and Fatima: Goulay,shfech?
Lolwa: shway shway 3alay!
Jude: yallah goulay?
Lolwa: fee wa7ed kalamne direct message eb twitter ow kan 3ajbah my tweets ow esloube bel kalam ow yabe y3rfne akthar fa yabene atheefah bbm.
Jude: chthaba.
Fatima: OH MY GOD.
Lolwa: Eeh, I rejected him at the first time bes gale he will just talk...nothing else.
Jude: Lesh ma glteelnah eb waqt'ha?
Fatima: n6ray jude,khal tkamel..
Lolwa: Fa bes I didn't reply him.
Jude: eeeem, ow ra7 etwafqeen?
Lolwa: ya zag,3ayal lesh ga3dah agoulkum..aked I need to know your answer first.
Fatima: madre shagoulch Lulu,bes etha taben go for it.
Jude: you have to take decision from now 3ashan b3den mu tg3den tfkren ow hatha ykhalech sar7ana ow el kel ra7 yla7th.
Lolwa: madre wallah,men kalamkum y3ni ajreb?
Jude: ana ma gelt jarbay bes madre kefech.
Fatima: etha taben.go for it.
Lolwa: khalas bes ow9al el bait I'll call you both ow goulole shagoulah.
Jude and Fatima: Ok!

She went home.
Salmat 3ala her mom and dad.She joined them and ate Lunch.

Mom: Shloun el madresah elyuom,Lulu?
Lolwa: zeina,bes wayed homeworks.
Mom: Sheday 7elch.
Lolwa: inchallah.

*Ahmed came in*

Ahmed: Salam 3alekum
All replied: ow 3alekum elsalam

He went upstaires.
Lolwa called Jude and Jude invited Fatima to the call.

Lolwa: Halla eb Jude ow Fatima
Jude and Fatima: Halla fech 7ayate
Lolwa: ha shgltaw?agoul eeh?
Jude: Madre kefech?
Fatima: wallah its your decision not ours.
Lolwa: khaleetoune confuse akthar.

WAIT!WAIT!..Lolwa replied
Jude: Shfech?
Fatima: Shfeeha hathe?
Lolwa he replied me again.
Jude: yallah read
Lolwa: ok

salehAl-****** message:
Lolwa,please just try we will be just friends not more...wallah 3jabne esloubech ow wede at3araf 3aleech akthar..please give me a chance.

Lolwa read the message to Jude and Fatima
Jude and Fatima: AWHHH! So cute.
Lolwa: yeah!
Jude: give him a chance,7aram?
Fatima: eeeh wallah,ksar kha6re!
Lolwa: khalas ok
Jude and Fatima : mu tnseen etgolen lenah el updates awal bawal we are waiting.
Lolwa: inchallah *laughed*

She replied:
Saleh,I'm sorry for rejecting you for the first time and its my pleasure to have you on my bbm list.

After 3minutes..
Saleh Al-****** replied:
La 3ade eshda3wah,mashkourah hatha my pin:***********

She received a message,read it,added him and slept

Monday
She checked bbm.

Saleh: tawa ma nawar elbbm.
Saleh:PING!!!
Saleh:shaklech nmtay,Goodnight.
Saleh: bes tgomen goulele!
Lolwa: Eb wjoudek,sorry I slept.
Lolwa:Good morning!
Saleh typing..
Saleh: Good morning..9a7 el noum!
Lolwa:9a7 bdnek!
Saleh:kaleetay breakfast?
Lolwa:la tawne agoum,yallah ana brou7 akel ow arou7 el school ttyl*Talk to you later*
Saleh: Bel3afya,bye.
Lolwa: y3afek,bye.

She went to school.

Jude:Hala eb lwailo,mu gelnah nabe akhbar awal eb awal?
Lolwa: weeh sorry,wallah nsait.
Fatima: la 3ade,yallah bel break goulelnah shnu 9ar bel tfa9eel!
Lolwa: LOOOOL,inchallah!

It was english lesson.
Mr:Lolwa come here.
Lolwa: why mister?
Mr: Its your oral.
Lolwa whispering: Ambaiiihh nsait! wai3 el7een hatha yg3ad yt7acha lama a9de3.
Mr: Lolwa?
Lolwa: oh yeah mister!,I'm sorry I forgot to do it.
Mr.WHAT! how many times I told you not to forget your oral.
Lolwa: I'm sorry,I'll do it tomorrow.
Mr.ok,you will have a break detension with me.
Lolwa: uufff,ok mister.

Jude and Fatima: waiiihh,y3ne mafe sowalf?
Lolwa: eeeh.

In break

Jude and Fatima: ouff meta tkhale9 hathe!
Lolwa: Mister,I'm done?
Mr:Yes,go!

Jude: Ha,sh9ar ames?
Fatima: eeeh Sh9ar?
Lolwa: N6raw 3alay shway khal atnafas!
jude: hahahaha,ha tnfstay?
Lolwa: eeh shoufaw,I Added him b3den nmt b3den lama gmt I checked my bbm and he pinged me serval times and told me when i wake up i have to talk to him.And I did...bes!
Jude:EMMMMMM!
Fatima:Shaklah yabe yklmech eb ay 6areeqah
Lolwa:shdarach entay*smiling*
Fatima: Embayen men kalamah!
Lolwa: Lool,Dr.Fouzeeyah dere3!?
Fatima and Jude: KAAAAAK
Lolwa: bes oush fth7tounah!
Jude and Fatima: LOL,enzen!

she went home.checked her bbm.
Saleh: ha still mardeetay!?
Lolwa:la kah tawne ared.
Saleh: ha shlounch?shkhbarech?
Lolwa:tamam,el7amedallah.
Saleh:Doum:*.
Lolwa:Thanks.
Saleh:wlc.




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CHAPTER 1

The story is talking about 4 parts:
Love
Problems
Betray
Friendship

Ana esme Lolwa,16 years old,Tanned,Brown hair and slim.

My best friends are Jude and Fatima.
Jude:15 years old,Black hair and slim.
Fatima:17 years old,Tanned,Black hair and chubby.


My friends and I were in year 10,we thought we could have a year full of memories because next year we will be graduated.

Sunday

*Deena is my maid*

Deena: wake up its 6:30.
Ana: gulay 7ag mama I'm tired,mabe arou7 school elyuom.
Deena: Ok!

Deena went to mom..

Deena: Madam,Lulu said she's tired and she doesn"t want to go to school.
Mom: La gouleelaha goumay,maku ghyab!!
Deena:Ok,Madam.

Deena knocked the door at Lolwa's.
*tok-tok*

Lolwa:HAAAAAAA!
Deena:Lulu,your mom said you have to wake up and go to school.
Lolwa: she screamed and said*I'MMMM TIREEDDDD*

Deena left.

Lolwa went to the bathroom...
Brushed my teeth,washed and dressed my uniform.
she went Downstaires.Ate Breakfast and saw Ahmed

*Ahmed is my oldest brother,18 years old and tanned*

Ahmed: 9aba7 el khair,Shlounch elyuom?
Lolwa: Ahmed,male khlgeeeeek!
Ahmed: Afa,Lesh?
Lolwa: 7ade t3bana ow mu nayemah 3adel.
Ahmed: S'hrana ha!
Lolwa: Eeh..
Ahmed: a7san tstahleeen,3ashan mara thanya tnameen embacher!
Lolwa: YOUH! ana arou7 elschool a7sanle.

*Lolwa left the house and told the driver to drop her to school*

Raj: Mama,I go to school
Lolwa: Emm wait.

*she called Jude*

Lolwa: JUDEEEE!
Jude: HAA!
Lolwa: taben breakfast from starbucks?FASTTT!
Jude: Eeh aked abe,hahahaha.
Lolwa: yal mafjou3ah,enzen ask Fatima ow goulele fast on bbm.
Jude: khala9 ok.
Lolwa:bye
Jude:bye

*Lolwa hanged the phone*

Lolwa shouted Raj.

Raj:Yes!
Lolwa: go to Starbucks.
Raj: ok Madam.

They arrived to starbucks and Lolwa joined the line.

Jude on bbm:

PING!!!
PING!!!
PING!!!
PING!!!

Lolwa: HAAAA!
Jude: Abe club-sandwich ow coffe with cream.
Lolwa: ow Fatima?
Jude: tabe Mocha with chocolate sauce.
Lolwa: Ok,yallah bye.
Jude:bye

She ordered and went to school

HEYYYY GIRLSSSS *Lolwa shouted*

Jude: hala wallah eb lwailo,ween my order.
Fatima: Hala wallah.
Lolwa: I gave Jude a bad look and answered: ya shagoul yal mafjouu3ah mal a6gech.
Jude: KAAAK,sorry.
Fatima: LAUGHT OUT LOUD!

They ate and the bell rang!
they went to the class.

Lolwa slept as usual at history class.
Jude was playing with Fatima's hair.
Fatima was copying notes.

They went home.

Lolwa checked her metions and direct messages on Twitter.
She found a direct message from a  stranger called  Saleh Al*******,she opened the message..





Saleh: Hello,I liked your tweets and i would like to add you on bbm.
She read the message and kept thinking would she add him or no.

Monday 25 June 2012

Lujain betraying Fatima

A young writer wants to write about a girl who betrayed her friend for a guy.

The girl named Lujain and her friend named Fatima,they were so close to each other.They had been together for couple of years then Fatima met a boy in her school called Yousef .She had crush on him since she was in grade 7,but she kept it secret.In grade 8 she wanted to show Yousef that she had a crush on him but he still didn't get it.Every break she used to glimpse at Yousef when he talks,eats and walks.She thought she would share her secret to her best friend Lujain.She told Lujain the secret and Lujain encouraged her to go and say to Yousef that she had crush on him since Grade 7.Fatima is a Shy and stubborn girl so that she kept it secret.

The Day After She wrote a letter saying:

"DEAR YOUSEF,
I just want you to know I had a crush on you since grade 7 and wanted to share my feelings to you.

Lujain gave him the message,he took it and read it.
Fatima didn't recieve anything from him,she kept waiting and waiting.When the school finished,Yousef came to Fatima and wishpered ''I LOVE YOU''.Fatima was shocked and embarssed in the same time.She told Lujain but Lujain seems not that happy for Fatima.After days Fatima knew that Lujain had Yousef's number and she talks to him everyday.Fatima was not sure that what she heard  was true so she asked Lujain and Lujain answered 'YES,ITS TRUE'.Fatima was shocked and depressed how her friend talks with her crush.Fatima started screaming and yelling at Lujain that how could she do like that.Lujain ignored Fatima and went.

Fatima told yousef about what happened between Lujain and her.He told her not to worryand"I'll be your everything''.After weeks her Friend called Dana was dating Yousef and she told Fatima.Fatima had a sudden shock and smiled to Dana.

Fatima went home called Lujain and cried a lot.She explained for her everything and Lujain felt sorry for her.Lujain told her he don't deserve you,you deserve someone better.

Fatima forgotted about Yousef and continued her life.
Lujain started dating yousef and one day Fatima saw them together in a mall.She fainted and when she woke up and thought it was a dream then she saw them together holding each others hand and smiling to Fatima.


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